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MY FIRST SWIMMING CARNIVAL On Friday 22nd of Febuary at 6 a clock we had our swimming carnival which was held at the Greytown swimming baths as it was a hot night as the water was so warm as when you got out you would want to go back in as our family went to watch Courtney and I swim as when we arrived we got to warm up as you could practice swimming your lengths if you wanted to or if you didn’t want to swim lengths you could just keep warm.

There was food and drinks to eat like sausages and chocolate bars as I got a sausage after my one length backstroke. At 6:30 the carnival the carnival began as my first race was the one length freestyle as I bet my own personal best time so I got a ribon. My next race was the one length backstroke as I got another ribon for beating my personal best time then my second to last ace was the one length brestroke as I just bet my own personal best to get my third ribon of the night.

I didn’t do the meadly as for a surprise I got into the flying squad as I was racing my sister as my team was Georga who went 1st, Sian who went 2nd , I went 3rd and Ale went 4th as we came 4th out of five teams in our team relay. I really enjoyed the night and I hope I can do the carnival again sometime!!! WRITTEN BY JORDAN

LIVING DANGEROUSLY About two weeks ago I went to my friends place to stay the night and we went to the Masterton pools to play. When we were at the pools we went down the slide together as it was scary as we fell on each other at the end of the slide.

Later on at the pools we did some swimming lengths in the pool lanes and I dived in at the wrong time because my friend had pushed me into the pool and I had almost drowned until I had swimmed under water until I could touch the bottom and then stand up.

After I had almost drowned we went into the river ride because we were so cold from swimming lengths as the river ride warmed us up and it was so cool in the river ride as we were going so fast that we almost ran into the wall as it was scary. Since we had got warm we decided to go outside and jump off the diving boards and it was so scary but it was so fun that we decided to go lots of times until we had to go home but we had a cool day at the pools with my friend Zac!! WRITTEN BY JORDAN

CAMP POEM

You go for a run and eat a bun go & find your clue in the middle of the poo you find a clue on the log and then you do a dance in your dirty pants you meet up with horse and say of course when you feed them food they’re in a good mood when you’re coming first you get worst but when you’re finished you are so relieved that you can sit there and relax and wait for the others and when everybody arrives you get a chocolate bar!!!

by jordan

THE STORY OF GEORGE& COSMO

Cosmo was driving down the road in his tow truck when he saw and crazy old man speed up to the pizza shop and run in! “I’d better tow his car away!”, thought Cosmo. As soon as he drove away with the car, the crazy guy came out of the shop with pizzas and started running after the truck!

Then he heard an engine start behind him and the cab crumpled behind him! Cosmo stopped the truck and got out, when he saw the crazy man in his car smashed through the cab. Then he saw the crazy guy jump out of his car with a fire extinguisher and spray it all over Cosmo’s back. Then the crazy guy said “Hi I’m George!” “Wanna come over to my place and have some pizza” “OK”, said Cosmo. Then Cosmo noticed that George’s number plate said “Georgerulz06”while Cosmo’s number plate said “TTRDANGER66A”

They drove back to George’s place in George’s mini that was not in very good condition! They ate all of the pizza when there was a knock on the door! George went to answer it and it was the cops! “you have a find of 27,00 dollars of car damage and you have to insurance! “Ummmmmm, the money is in my car....”, said George. George went to get his money out of his car that he didn’t have...! Then they both jumped in George’s car and drove off....

They drove down to the beach and did some skids. Then they ditched George’s and got into George’s house boat and sailed away!

About half an hour later they could see the coast of a small island that was George’s Hide away from the law, but, behind them was a police boat speeding towards them! “OH CRAP!!!!!!”,shouted Cosmo & george together. The dock of the island got closer & Cosmo & Geroge got ready to jump to the dock. It was in range so Cosmo & George jumped to it....and missed! They both ended up in the sea! They climbed up to the dock and looked for a car!

While they were busy looking, they cops sneaked up behind them and...

BY JORDAN & LOUIS